There is a very logical reason why I detest short stories & end up scrolling down to preview the length, to either stay or leave before I've read a single word. And that is because I cannot get invested in characters so ephemeral. Long stories have so much better detail, pace & character development. I shall remember both Seth & your beloved Steph as one of the all time greats of inflation literature, & rank it as a contender for the top 5 raunchiest BE stories (along with 'The Impossible Escape', 'Blueberry Peer Pressure', & 'Nozzle').

The aspect that seems to attract me to these kind of stories is their sensual enjoyment of it. If it hurts them..  I can't appreciate that. Also, I much prefer it when they are inflated from anywhere but the mouth. Putting a tube down a girl's throat is often appealing to authors because then they don't have to write any dialogue for the character, which in my opinion is the best part! You could have written more if I'm honest, but what dialogue you did give them was very direct & effective

Really great job though. I do hope you write more adventures about these two!